Tuesday, September 15, 2020
The Missing Girl
I have been writing stories and I want to share my stories about a missing little girl.
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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I would love to know more of your story Sienna.I like that you have left the end as a cliffhanger.It gives the reader the chance to decide how the story ends.
ReplyDeleteHi Sienna. I like your story, but it needs to have some full stops and some commas as well. But your story is good.
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