We have been writing animal stories for our class and i want to show my story.
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am Year 5 and my teacher is Ms Clifford. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thursday, December 3, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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What a great story Sienna.
ReplyDeleteI LOVE❤reading stories about animals.My favourite part of your story was when you dropped the food.
Do you have any pets at home?.We have 1 cat,3 birds and a puppy.(He's actually a dog but we always refer to him as a puppy)
Hello Sienna.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog today.
I hope you are having a wonderful holiday and I can't wait to see what you have been doing.
Hello Sienna.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog today.
I can't wait to see what you learning you have been doing over these long holidays.
Good afternoon Sienna.
ReplyDeleteI was just checking your blog to see if you had completed any of the SLJ activities.
What have you been doing these holidays?.
Samantha and I have been fairly busy.We went to mini golf a couple of weeks ago.We then went for a hot chocolate and a piece of cake.
Tomorrow we are hoping to go to Willowbank to feed the lemurs and check out the other animals.
Good afternoon Sienna.
ReplyDeleteI am just checking your blog to see if you had added any new posts lately.I can't wait to see what you have been doing over these holidays.
Samantha and I went to Wiloowbank and fed a lot of the free roaming animals.
Hello Sienna.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have visited your blog today.
Have a wonderful last week off school.I am looking to hearing about what you have been doing.
All the best.
Hello Sienna.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have checked out your blog tonight.
I am looking forward to seeing your new posts for Term 1.
Hello Sienna.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have checked out your blog tonight.