Our class has been making recounts and i was hoping that i could show you mine.
Last week I was at home playing shell shockers with my friend Shikya.
My mum put a box on the table i couldn't stop looking at it.
I opened the box and there was a dog i was so happy until i seen that it only had three legs ,but i didn't like it so i threw it away.
But the dog didn't care the dog was caring cheerful , then he saw a ball and dashed over to it
I only didn't like it because I had no leg too, the dog found a ball and gave it to me. So I kicked it straight into a box then the dog got stuck and pushed the box i was kinda worried.
Then it got out and looked for the ball then it pounced back to me and gave the ball. Then i told my mum that i was going outside with the dog, i named the dog Clumsy. The End
Hello Sienna.
ReplyDeleteWhat a great story.I feel sorry for the dog.We used to have a dog that had 3 legs.The children in Clinton called him names which wasn't fair.
Do you know why the dog only had 3 legs?.
Our dog was hit by a car when it was dark and the dog was black so he wasn't seen.
Love your writing Sienna. Nice interesting verbs like 'pounced'. TYou have made your writing great for a reader. Ka Pai!
ReplyDeleteGood afternoon Sienna.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog today.
hi sienna i like that you and the puppy look great you did great on your writning i like it so much . ka pai!
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