In room 11 we have been being Newspaper reporters and making a story about
it and i would like to show my story.
On Saturday the lighthouse shut down.
There was a boat coming and was about to hit the rocks.
“I was doing my work,” said Mr Tom. “I didn't like the sound of parties so I shut the window. Once i shut it the light went out so i got up to go see what happened.’’
I was terrified “ I grabbed my tool box and a lantern and went up stairs. He said.
When i saw what happened i was shocked. so i went to the
Highest floor, I heard the sound of a rushing boat coming.
I tried to pick up the light but i forgot that the tool box was there
so I fell down and dropped the light.He said.
I" went down stairs and opened the door to tell the
villagers . When i" opened the door i seen a horde of people
i was surprised.”.He said.
THE END
Good evening Sienna.
ReplyDeleteI can see you have used lots of punctuation,including speech marks.
Can you tell me why all the villagers turned up?.
Just remember that when you write the word I,it needs to be a capital one.
I hope you have a great holiday.