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Friday, June 11, 2021

The alien invasion

 I am walking down a long path, with spiky, sharp bushes surrounding me.

 I am walking when I see a puddle of green icky ooze with lots of prickels inside it.  

I stopped for a moment, then I carried on walking as I am walking I heard a scream. 

It sounded like a little girl, but after one or two seconds it was dead silence. 

I keep on thinking about it but I tried to get it out of my head by listening to some music.

But it didn't work, I finally got it out so I continued to walk, I see something shocking…

 

I see a massive alien spacecraft, I go up closer as I did the door hissed open.  

I hid as soon as I heard the door hiss open when I look what was happening. 

I see a very very short alien with razor sharp teeth, long curly fingers, and trickling green ooze coming from its mouth theres millions of them. As I am watching I see a human coming as the person got closer I see the aliens eyes go bright white when the person arrived.  But it was actually a dream.                                             

                                                               

                            


4 comments:

  1. WOW Sienna.I hope that you add to this.I am intrigued to see what happens next.
    Well done for posting a piece of powerful writing.

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    1. Hi Mrs Cassidy i thank you for commenting but i have changed the story a little bit so there is gonna be no chapters.

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  2. this is a awesome Alien rating Sienna keep the good work

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  3. Thank you elijaht for commenting on my blog

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