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Thursday, August 12, 2021

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 Wednesday 10th August 2021 


On your marks get set Bang!! I dived into the sparkling, clear water with my underwater camera, I was jumping over the hurdles.I was in 5th place then a whole group of jellyfish blocked my path. 

I tried to go around, under and over but I couldn't get through.What I did next was crazy, I swam straight through the jellyfish. I got burns everywhere on my body. It hurt a lot. I swam in pain then every one got lost a little. It was that one moment of my life I crossed the finish line and came first place. They gave the golden medal to me. The end

Underwater Olympics
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3 comments:

  1. Jane CliffordAugust 13, 2021 at 9:36 AM

    WOW Sienna. I love this. You have really thought about developing some great ideas! Well done this is such a quality piece of writing.

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  2. AnonymousAugust 13, 2021 at 9:57 AM

    thank you so much miss clifford i hope you are okay and doing fine cant wait to see you again

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  3. AnonymousAugust 13, 2021 at 9:58 AM

    hi sienna I loved your work you had some great ideas good job

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