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Friday, August 13, 2021

Sienna Narritive planner

 Shatter! Went a  plate of slimy rotten maggots, me and Annemieke walked towards the sound, as we were walking we heard a shriek.  We looked behind us,but there was nothing, we started walking again I stopped for a moment and thought something was wrong. It was that moment that I found out that we were in a pile of black slimy ooze, I was struggling to get out but I couldn't. Me and Annemieke looked in the hallway,that is when we saw the worst moment of our lives. It was a tall red eyed spiky spider creature, it was just standing there then, BAM!! It started running toward us. We screamed with terror in our eyes,we tried to get out but we couldn’t. Right that second we got out of the black ooze. We thought the spider was stupid enough to jump in the black ooze, but we were wrong. It jumped straight on the ceiling, we ran for our lives. It was to fast compared to us so we stopped and ducked then ran back to the kitchen.We did the biggest jump we could ever do, but as I was about to jump I tripped over.Once I tried to get up I got hit in the head then passed out. When I woke there was trickling blood on the ceiling. I tried to scream silently, then Annemieke whispered to me “don't move.” I nodded my head.She threw a piece of glass down the long dark crooked hallway so that the monster could chase it. 

I was surprised, the monster actually chased it. After that Annemieke helped me up. We ended up finding a grenade so we used it to kill the monster. BAM!!! The spider monster exploded. We went closer and we saw a key, so we used the key for the front door and it worked and that's how we escaped. 


10 comments:

  1. I am GLAD that I am reading this during the day Sienna.You have used some great describing words.They made me feel like I was in the story too.Thank goodness it was only a made up story.

    I hope the key is in a secure box where it can never be found.

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  2. Good morning Sienna.
    I am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a quick look at your blog to see if there was anything new.
    Take care and keep warm.

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  3. Have a wonderful day Sienna.
    Take care and keep warm.

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  4. Good afternoon Sienna.
    I hope you have an amazing week.Take care,keep safe and warm.It's cold out!.

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  5. Have a great week Sienna.I hope all is going well for you.

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  6. I can't wait to see what you have been working on over the passed few weeks Sienna.
    Have a wonderful weekend.

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  7. I hope you had a great first day back at school Sienna.

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  8. Have a great weekend Sienna.I look forward to your next post.

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  9. I hope you are having a great weekend Sienna.
    I am looking forward to reading your next post.

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